ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
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Version 2 - the original is here - [link] - for comparison.
Improvements as per tutor feedback - improved kerning between the V and i of 'Vision' in the headline (needed to drop the tittles to compensate/fit), sightly increased type size and increased whitespace around the pullquote to draw it out a little more, increased type size & emboldened type on graphs/charts so as to print better, added another hairline between the standfirst & body copy - aligned with the bottom of the facing image, & increased space above and below the headline by dropping the middle hairline a few mm.
Improvements as per tutor feedback - improved kerning between the V and i of 'Vision' in the headline (needed to drop the tittles to compensate/fit), sightly increased type size and increased whitespace around the pullquote to draw it out a little more, increased type size & emboldened type on graphs/charts so as to print better, added another hairline between the standfirst & body copy - aligned with the bottom of the facing image, & increased space above and below the headline by dropping the middle hairline a few mm.
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Hate to say it after they scrawled all over your lovely mounted version, but those little improvements have cranked it up a notch
Very nice Mr Fleck
Very nice Mr Fleck